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| Strolling down the silent, empty corridor | Strolling down the silent, empty corridor | ||
| - | Peeking into the other rooms to see what else misery | + | Peeking into the other rooms to see what else had misery visted |
| - | But instead I’m jolted | + | But instead, I’m jolted |
| My ears not perceiving silence, but joy. | My ears not perceiving silence, but joy. | ||
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| And turn to leave the room. | And turn to leave the room. | ||
| - | My head full of thoughts, | + | My head was full of thoughts, |
| I take to the streets | I take to the streets | ||
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| But my haste dies in a heartbeat and I stop dead in my tracks | But my haste dies in a heartbeat and I stop dead in my tracks | ||
| - | As the warm house lights shine off into the darkness with sillouhettes | + | As the warm house lights shine off into the darkness with silhouettes |
| - | + | ||
| - | familiar. | + | |
| I walk through the front door and look inside. | I walk through the front door and look inside. | ||
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| There Dad sits on the couch laughing, | There Dad sits on the couch laughing, | ||
| - | Still managing to never get sick of his favorite | + | Still managing to never get sick of his favourite |
| While Mom sits in her armchair, | While Mom sits in her armchair, | ||
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| I don’t have the heart to check up on Ava. | I don’t have the heart to check up on Ava. | ||
| - | I don’t want to look in her gleaming eyes just so that mine can never meet hers again. | + | I don’t want to look into her gleaming eyes just so that mine can never meet hers again. |
| And then, in only a fraction of a second | And then, in only a fraction of a second | ||
| - | That wave of melancholic relief that washed over me in that moment finally ran dry. | + | That wave of melancholic relief that washed over me at that moment finally ran dry. |
| I knew that the moment we heard the landline start ringing | I knew that the moment we heard the landline start ringing | ||
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| I can embrace you | I can embrace you | ||
| - | I can comfort you in as many ways possible | + | I can comfort you in as many ways as possible |
| but no matter what I try, you don’t hear a thing. | but no matter what I try, you don’t hear a thing. | ||
